Discussion:L’appareillage BT : fonctions et choix

--Suniti (discussion) 3 juin 2016 à 00:56 (EDT)

Points to check

page Coordination entre les disjoncteurs is very hard to read

too many levels ... and problem with "2 bullets" as mentioned by Romain on HipChat

I already changed a sub-title level, which was not coherent with the book (the one named "Sélectivité") --LMischler (discussion) 15 juin 2016 à 08:14 (EDT)

the "grey/green box" with text "La sélectivité logique ..." is at the wrong place (not good in the book), as it relates to § with similar title (Sélectivité logique ...)

Romain: I find it very strange (in the book also) that the paragraph "Synthèse des techniques de sélectivité" is longer than the previous ones which are supposed to give the details ... and after a very quick look, the content seems to be partly similar

possible ways to improve readability:

separate in several pages (one page for "discrimination", another one for "sélectivité" ...

reduce sub-title levels, to have one level of bullets (maybe 2)

OR have an expert to re-write this part ... as even in the book it is really very hard to read

Bullet/sub-bullets points added/changed

• Pdf pg H2 >> Protection électrique en BT

• PDF pg H12 >> "-" changed to sub-bullets >> Normes et description des disjoncteurs#Description

Checked

Format to be checked

• Pdf pg H9 (text in bold) >> Les appareils combinés

• PDF pg H14 >> Table modified (one cell divided into two) >> Caractéristiques fondamentales d'un disjoncteur#Courant de réglage (Irth ou Ir) des déclencheurs

• PDF pf H11 (For Laurent) >> Fig H19 >> Bullet points coming with FR specific content Fonctions réalisées

I suppose you mean that the blue round bullets don't look good with FR-specif text in orange, is that it Suniti?

Not sure I can modify it ... and it can be acceptable like this ==> I saved the feedback as future improvement of bullet lists format

--LMischler (discussion) 16 juin 2016 à 10:08 (EDT)

• PDF pg H12 (For Laurent) >> Fig H20 >> Sub-bullets inside table changed to math formula (can we place the bullets/sub-bullets in any other way? >> La solution disjoncteur

I changed the math formulas to a template ... and changed the color of both to the standard wiki blue

it is a bit better, and that will do for now

Suniti: if there are more of "blue squares" and "empty blue square" in coming chapters, please use these 2 templates

this way, we can always change the format in the future, just by changing the templates

--LMischler (discussion) 16 juin 2016 à 10:08 (EDT)

• Pdf pg H59 (For Laurent) >> Position of symbol (to be checked) Disjoncteurs pour schéma IT

it's OK --LMischler (discussion) 16 juin 2016 à 10:08 (EDT)

Level 3/ 4 headings

• Pdf pg H6 >> Les fusibles

• Pdf pg H6 >> Coordination entre les disjoncteurs

checked

No EN link for module 2.2

En link added--Romain.R (discussion) 15 juin 2016 à 10:02 (EDT)

Fig H24 (to be added) >> To be checked with Laurent

Done --Suniti (discussion) 9 juin 2016 à 02:28 (EDT)

Pdf pg H32 >> Fig H64

Disjoncteurs ultra-rapides

• Cell border syntax/code to be asked
• Table is an image in EN