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= Chapter H >> Migration Done = | |||
--[[Utilisateur:Suniti|Suniti]] ([[Discussion utilisateur:Suniti|discussion]]) 3 juin 2016 à 00:56 (EDT) | --[[Utilisateur:Suniti|Suniti]] ([[Discussion utilisateur:Suniti|discussion]]) 3 juin 2016 à 00:56 (EDT) | ||
= | = improvements to do later = | ||
=== Pdf pg H25 >> Fig H46 >> arrow symbols with white background don't look good === | |||
: '''Laurent''' to check if the wiki could manage SVG transparency | |||
: alternative solution = use .gif for these arrow symbols (and other similar icon images in tables) | |||
=== page [[Coordination entre les disjoncteurs]] is very hard to read === | |||
: too many levels ... and problem with "2 bullets" as mentioned by Romain on HipChat | |||
: I already changed a sub-title level, which was not coherent with the book (the one named "Sélectivité") --[[Utilisateur:LMischler|LMischler]] ([[Discussion utilisateur:LMischler|discussion]]) 15 juin 2016 à 08:14 (EDT) | |||
: the "grey/green box" with text "La sélectivité logique ..." is at the wrong place (not good in the book), as it relates to § with similar title (Sélectivité logique ...) | |||
: '''Romain''': I find it very strange (in the book also) that the paragraph "Synthèse des techniques de sélectivité" is longer than the previous ones which are supposed to give the details ... and after a very quick look, the content seems to be partly similar | |||
: possible ways to improve readability: | |||
:: separate in several pages (one page for "discrimination", another one for "sélectivité" ... | |||
:: reduce sub-title levels, to have one level of bullets (maybe 2) | |||
:: OR have an expert to re-write this part ... as even in the book it is really very hard to read | |||
=== modify image DB422429.svg - too much white space on the right === | |||
: see page [[Coordination entre les disjoncteurs]] --[[Utilisateur:LMischler|LMischler]] ([[Discussion utilisateur:LMischler|discussion]]) 13 juillet 2016 à 08:34 (EDT) | |||
= INFO = | |||
: '''Suniti''': if there are more of "blue squares" and "empty blue square" in coming chapters, please use these 2 templates | |||
: this way, we can always change the format in the future, just by changing the templates | |||
: --[[Utilisateur:LMischler|LMischler]] ([[Discussion utilisateur:LMischler|discussion]]) 16 juin 2016 à 10:08 (EDT) | |||
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= DONE = | |||
= Points to check = | |||
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=== page [[Normes et description des disjoncteurs]] === | |||
: I just changed 2 images into a gallery, to avoid problem of small width image with a long title (not looking good) | |||
: '''Romain''' please check that the gallery + text of title + text associated with each image is OK | |||
: --[[Utilisateur:LMischler|LMischler]] ([[Discussion utilisateur:LMischler|discussion]]) 16 juin 2016 à 11:06 (EDT) | |||
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=== Pdf pg H32 >> Fig H64 === | |||
[[ Disjoncteurs ultra-rapides]] | |||
* Cell border syntax/code to be asked (to highlight example values in the table) - this table was migrated as an image in EN wiki | |||
: the example values highlighted in the figure (in the PDF) are not mentioned at all in the text, so why highlight these values ? | |||
: ==> I decided not to highlight any value in this table (would also be not so simple to do) | |||
: I just improved a bit the overall look&feel | |||
: '''Romain''' please confirm it's OK | |||
:: ok for me | |||
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<s> | <s> | ||
* PDF pg H12 (For Laurent) >> Fig H20 >> Sub-bullets inside table changed to math formula (can we place the bullets/sub-bullets in any other way? >> [[La solution disjoncteur]] | |||
: I changed the math formulas to a template ... and changed the color of both to the standard wiki blue | |||
: it is a bit better, and that will do for now | |||
=== Format to be checked === | |||
* PDF pg H11 (For Laurent) >> Fig H19 >> Bullet points coming with FR specific content [[Fonctions réalisées]] | |||
: this was a problem with fr-specific text in orange background, no more a problem now that it is changed to orange text | |||
:: so DONE --[[Utilisateur:LMischler|LMischler]] ([[Discussion utilisateur:LMischler|discussion]]) 21 juin 2016 à 05:26 (EDT) | |||
=== Bullet/sub-bullets points added/changed === | === Bullet/sub-bullets points added/changed === | ||
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* PDF pg H12 >> "-" changed to sub-bullets >> [[Normes et description des disjoncteurs#Description ]] | * PDF pg H12 >> "-" changed to sub-bullets >> [[Normes et description des disjoncteurs#Description ]] | ||
:Checked | :Checked | ||
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=== No EN link for module 2.2 === | |||
: En link added--[[Utilisateur:Romain.R|Romain.R]] ([[Discussion utilisateur:Romain.R|discussion]]) 15 juin 2016 à 10:02 (EDT) | |||
</s> | </s> | ||
=== Format to be checked === | === Format to be checked === | ||
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* Pdf pg H9 (text in bold) >> [[Les appareils combinés#Sectionneur-fusible ou fusible-sectionneur + discontacteur]] | * Pdf pg H9 (text in bold) >> [[Les appareils combinés#Sectionneur-fusible ou fusible-sectionneur + discontacteur]] | ||
* PDF pg H14 >> Table modified (one cell divided into two) >> [[Caractéristiques fondamentales d'un disjoncteur#Courant de réglage (Irth ou Ir) des déclencheurs ]] | * PDF pg H14 >> Table modified (one cell divided into two) >> [[Caractéristiques fondamentales d'un disjoncteur#Courant de réglage (Irth ou Ir) des déclencheurs ]] | ||
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* Pdf pg H59 (For Laurent) >> Position of symbol (to be checked) [[Disjoncteurs pour schéma IT]] | * Pdf pg H59 (For Laurent) >> Position of symbol (to be checked) [[Disjoncteurs pour schéma IT]] | ||
: it's OK --[[Utilisateur:LMischler|LMischler]] ([[Discussion utilisateur:LMischler|discussion]]) 16 juin 2016 à 10:08 (EDT) | |||
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=== Level 3/ 4 headings === | === Level 3/ 4 headings === | ||
| Ligne 31 : | Ligne 90 : | ||
* Pdf pg H6 >> [[Coordination entre les disjoncteurs#Principe de la sélectivité selon le type de protection]] | * Pdf pg H6 >> [[Coordination entre les disjoncteurs#Principe de la sélectivité selon le type de protection]] | ||
: checked | |||
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=== Fig H24 (to be added) >> To be checked with Laurent === | === Fig H24 (to be added) >> To be checked with Laurent === | ||
:: Done --[[Utilisateur:Suniti|Suniti]] ([[Discussion utilisateur:Suniti|discussion]]) 9 juin 2016 à 02:28 (EDT) | :: Done --[[Utilisateur:Suniti|Suniti]] ([[Discussion utilisateur:Suniti|discussion]]) 9 juin 2016 à 02:28 (EDT) | ||
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=== Figures xls to be checked with laurent fo table H66 === | === Figures xls to be checked with laurent fo table H66 === | ||
: done--[[Utilisateur:LMischler|LMischler]] ([[Discussion utilisateur:LMischler|discussion]]) 16 juin 2016 à 11:06 (EDT) | |||
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Dernière version du 19 juillet 2016 à 08:23
Chapter H >> Migration Done
--Suniti (discussion) 3 juin 2016 à 00:56 (EDT)
improvements to do later
Pdf pg H25 >> Fig H46 >> arrow symbols with white background don't look good
- Laurent to check if the wiki could manage SVG transparency
- alternative solution = use .gif for these arrow symbols (and other similar icon images in tables)
page Coordination entre les disjoncteurs is very hard to read
- too many levels ... and problem with "2 bullets" as mentioned by Romain on HipChat
- I already changed a sub-title level, which was not coherent with the book (the one named "Sélectivité") --LMischler (discussion) 15 juin 2016 à 08:14 (EDT)
- the "grey/green box" with text "La sélectivité logique ..." is at the wrong place (not good in the book), as it relates to § with similar title (Sélectivité logique ...)
- Romain: I find it very strange (in the book also) that the paragraph "Synthèse des techniques de sélectivité" is longer than the previous ones which are supposed to give the details ... and after a very quick look, the content seems to be partly similar
- possible ways to improve readability:
- separate in several pages (one page for "discrimination", another one for "sélectivité" ...
- reduce sub-title levels, to have one level of bullets (maybe 2)
- OR have an expert to re-write this part ... as even in the book it is really very hard to read
modify image DB422429.svg - too much white space on the right
- see page Coordination entre les disjoncteurs --LMischler (discussion) 13 juillet 2016 à 08:34 (EDT)
INFO
- Suniti: if there are more of "blue squares" and "empty blue square" in coming chapters, please use these 2 templates
- this way, we can always change the format in the future, just by changing the templates
- --LMischler (discussion) 16 juin 2016 à 10:08 (EDT)
DONE
Points to check
page Normes et description des disjoncteurs
- I just changed 2 images into a gallery, to avoid problem of small width image with a long title (not looking good)
- Romain please check that the gallery + text of title + text associated with each image is OK
- --LMischler (discussion) 16 juin 2016 à 11:06 (EDT)
Pdf pg H32 >> Fig H64
- Cell border syntax/code to be asked (to highlight example values in the table) - this table was migrated as an image in EN wiki
- the example values highlighted in the figure (in the PDF) are not mentioned at all in the text, so why highlight these values ?
- ==> I decided not to highlight any value in this table (would also be not so simple to do)
- I just improved a bit the overall look&feel
- Romain please confirm it's OK
- ok for me
- PDF pg H12 (For Laurent) >> Fig H20 >> Sub-bullets inside table changed to math formula (can we place the bullets/sub-bullets in any other way? >> La solution disjoncteur
- I changed the math formulas to a template ... and changed the color of both to the standard wiki blue
- it is a bit better, and that will do for now
Format to be checked
- PDF pg H11 (For Laurent) >> Fig H19 >> Bullet points coming with FR specific content Fonctions réalisées
- this was a problem with fr-specific text in orange background, no more a problem now that it is changed to orange text
- so DONE --LMischler (discussion) 21 juin 2016 à 05:26 (EDT)
Bullet/sub-bullets points added/changed
- Pdf pg H2 >> Protection électrique en BT
- PDF pg H12 >> "-" changed to sub-bullets >> Normes et description des disjoncteurs#Description
- Checked
No EN link for module 2.2
- En link added--Romain.R (discussion) 15 juin 2016 à 10:02 (EDT)
Format to be checked
- Pdf pg H9 (text in bold) >> Les appareils combinés
- PDF pg H14 >> Table modified (one cell divided into two) >> Caractéristiques fondamentales d'un disjoncteur#Courant de réglage (Irth ou Ir) des déclencheurs
- Pdf pg H59 (For Laurent) >> Position of symbol (to be checked) Disjoncteurs pour schéma IT
- it's OK --LMischler (discussion) 16 juin 2016 à 10:08 (EDT)
Level 3/ 4 headings
- Pdf pg H6 >> Les fusibles
- Pdf pg H6 >> Coordination entre les disjoncteurs
- checked
Fig H24 (to be added) >> To be checked with Laurent
- Done --Suniti (discussion) 9 juin 2016 à 02:28 (EDT)
Figures xls to be checked with laurent fo table H66
- done--LMischler (discussion) 16 juin 2016 à 11:06 (EDT)
